Week 20
In this week, I
show my report to Kate and received useful advises. The first is I am not paying
attention it is a report, so I am not using the third person to write. Then Kate
gives me some advise to improve my report structure. At first, I think I just
need to analyze the shoot business’ primary and second research. Kate suggested
me to add the analysis of the local restaurants and department of university. I
remember it, because I think my writing is not well. So this will let me know
some key points in report structure.
I think because
of this term I am very busy, so some times I cannot follow my time management. However,
this two weeks I make a plan and told myself I must finish it. The result is I finish
it in high quality, I know the time management it really very important and
useful in my life. So I will keep it.
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